Reviews for Hold On
Romantic Squirrel chapter 1 . 10/21/2003
Well, you have defintily improved over time. Thats great. And I can tell you are planning on keeping me very very busy over the weekend. But hey you take the time to correct them, why shouldn't I take the time to fix them. Thanks again.
mmoonsshiner chapter 1 . 9/29/2003
* Your poetry speaks volumes,measured bby a devine hand ,simple metered verses more complex than life, as intriguing as death, with questions hanging over what if, and what maybe, yet nothing remains unanswered.*

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~Nat The Unchanging Darkness~
Tenika D chapter 1 . 9/29/2003
Wonderful! This is the kind of romance poetry I really like - it speaks great volumes of love (whether fantasy based or real) but also includes a certain amount of imagination. Instead of the simple 'I love you,' you speak of devotion in the simplest and most elegant manner. I'm not dissing all of you other romance poets out there, this is just the kind I prefer. Well done, and thank you for reviewing my poem!

Tenika Dargan