Reviews for Wishing
WiredCrazyFrances chapter 1 . 3/24/2004
this poem is good...the only thing that could maybe have been improved on is to elaborate the emotion a bit more...otherwise it's very good.
Romantic Squirrel chapter 1 . 10/21/2003
aw this is so sad.
Tenika D chapter 1 . 9/29/2003
So sad . . . But so true. I think everyone's felt like this at least once in their lives; you're just one of the few people to sucessfully put it into words. Another touching piece; well done.

Tenika Dargan
Elise Justure chapter 1 . 9/28/2003
great poem i like it. and umm on my poem 'Mater Luna' the line at the bottom is defined in the description. Thanks for the reveiw. And keep writing. I love your poetry.
darkblackwings chapter 1 . 9/28/2003
ah, its preatty, sad but preatty, I like it. Good job.
Jess Angel chapter 1 . 9/28/2003
Angsty emotion-filled poem. I could relate to this...that feeling. I think many can too. You expressed it well. Thanks for sharing...

Write on!

Jess 0:o)