Reviews for Boiling 1Minute Relationships |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Great metaphore(I know it is spelled wrong)I like this. I hate getting burned. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very interesting - I like this one; it makes you think out of the box. Well done! . Again, I like the last line the best; it has a lot of flavor to it, a nice finished sound. But it also leaves the right end for the imagination; it gives the reader the chance to continue the poem in their own minds. Heh - I like the talking egg. Tenika Dargan |
![]() ![]() ![]() woo, this is creative! I haven't seen this sort of poetry in a while. I like how you played around with the structure. Nice job! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Another great play on structure. I loved this...great insight as well. Clever, using the egg...hehehe. Good stuff. Write on! Jess 0:o) |