| Reviews for Night Lights II |
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   Jen84 chapter 1 . 8/22/2004 Jess, you write so beautifully of the stars. I think I'll have to take a look outside into the night sky in a few minutes. Thanks for reminding me of them. Jen |
| Bob n Kazzi chapter 1 . 7/26/2004 Urgh I hate you so much. I hate how you make me read a poem and I imagine exactly where I would be stood, where I would be looking up at the stars. i don't really hate you, I just envy your ability to do this. I love you and your writing really. - Urgh *she pouts* Could you have a looksie at my short(ish) story called "Falling" please? And also my other short(ish) story "That Guy". I love you and your writing so I would love your opinion. Thank you! |
| Urto chapter 1 . 6/30/2004 Wow thats pretty darn good. How come your stories get a whopping 25 reviews and im lucky to squeeze past 8? I NEED MEDICATION...I mean help. he..er...LOOK OVER THERE! |
| Carl Epitome of Evil chapter 1 . 5/10/2004 I like this better than the first. The way you wrote it made it fun and made me think. Very cool. |
| Shuffle Queen chapter 1 . 5/7/2004 You could turn the worst writing into Newberry winning material...working with your own masterpiece...it was superb! Later. ~Shuffle Queen~ |
| Juliet Squared chapter 1 . 1/9/2004 Again, this is amazing. It works well as free verse, too. Great work :-D |
| SeaVoi chapter 1 . 1/4/2004 I like that one its cool! |
| Aslan Israel chapter 1 . 12/18/2003 Another great piece of poetry! You really know how to capture the essence of things, like the night sky. You have a great gift; so keep up the great work! |
| cosmo-queen chapter 1 . 12/15/2003 Interesting take on your original poem. Once again, you really capture the lights of the night sky. Keep writing :) *cosmo-queen* |
| dfgsfdghftgt44 chapter 1 . 12/6/2003 This is very pretty and I really like it! Great poem! ~Cirien Phoenix of the Eternal Phlame |
| Plato's Optic Runaway chapter 1 . 11/12/2003 Ah, beautiful imagery and metaphors. Wonderful job. Yes, loveliness and peace in the ignorant darkness... |
| eew chapter 1 . 11/3/2003 ~ Wow. I love this poem! Really great words and descriptions. They're like short words that form a great tapestry in the sky. Keep Writing. I mean it. c. butterfly~** |
| Daemone Angelus chapter 1 . 10/21/2003 I wouldn't have guessed that there were so many ways to describe light. lol. |
| Caitir chapter 1 . 10/4/2003 i love that! It's happy, which is unusual, and it's very melodic. very nice. |
| JTierra1988 chapter 1 . 10/4/2003 I like it! "Gazing up Into the night Fastened in Their silver trance" is very visual and creates a good picture in my head _/ JMBunny |