Creepy...but that means that joey's one true love is matt.

Wait,wait hold it a minute, supposing joey(in shawna) does fall in love with, say, guy then she switches back to her own body then how is guy supposed to know that? He'll think that shawna(the actual one) is the girl he fell in love with, and joey(the actual one) is just some girl.

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I like the plot it was interesting and at some point i got confuse who she ends up with which is good. Although at times there were personality issues especially with Shawna she suppose to be the evil character but she grows on me. I think she deserve more moments than what you have given her.

loved it! It was funny at the right times but also dramatic at the right times. Awesome job!

This was excellent. Admittedly, the plot was cliche, but it was very well written, so that wasn't so bad. Nice job. )

I really like it so far! I'm actually writing a similar story. )

Great plot! I really loved it(:

it was very good

(i dont know about marching) but band rocks! lol. the only bad thing for me is the . strangley, all the cool and fun people (not that i am one) are in it so its pretty intertaining. lol. i play the oboe and im pretty safe to say that the oboe (achm hobo...lol) beats colorful hair any .

oh...in the summary i thought her cousin was a boy so i was like "huh?" but now i know! hehehehe. i like it. short but still sweet. cuts to the details like it should. (in my opinon) "this is my story" is a littke cliched though...oh well..lol.

I love the way you started your prologue.

It makes me want to read more,

which is what i'm gonna do right...

NOW! ]

Haha! Don't hate on band and emo kids! Though I'm sure you don't. That was hilarious! happy happy happy! I'm glad this epilogue wasn't cheesy or anything and that it was so funny!

AW! I'm so happy! I mean, you knew they were going to get together... but, AW! I love ti that it wasn't perfect at all! And that she was stepping on his foot and stuff... hee hhee! AW! I'm so happy! Great story! Now I'm on to the epilogue!