Reviews for Trading Faces
davidfnbowie chapter 11 . 6/21/2004
Good chapter...the only thing I have to say is: THE GET-UP KIDS ARE AWESOME! I love them...
nyyrocks chapter 14 . 6/21/2004
great story.i hope u update soon!
davidfnbowie chapter 2 . 6/21/2004
This scares me. Joey sounds almost exactly like me. One of my best friends' names is Matt...Good story!*winks* You're not stalking me, are you?
Only joking...
NeWriter chapter 14 . 6/21/2004
Very nice flashback. I didn't expect you to use a whole chapter to do it though! Anyway, I'm really anxious to read next chapter and find out what happened. This time, I think you managed pretty well with Matt's POV! ;) *gotta go to study* bye:D!
SilentBlueRose chapter 14 . 6/21/2004
Lol! That was so funny! Hah...
Good chapter, please update soon!
SilentBlueRose chapter 13 . 6/10/2004
I like this. Quite funny. It'd be terrible to be stuck in your preppy cousin's body. Eep. Poor Joey. Yep.
I will be checking back on this, so please update soon!
Oh, by the way, the Matt pov sounds cool.
Update soon!
NeWriter chapter 13 . 6/9/2004
Hello again! I'm glad that you considerated my suggestion. Well, this chapter was a turn-off entirely! The only constructive thing I would have to say is that by the end, when Joey tells Shawna how she feels, that you put like more hesitation before she does it. More stuff like after "I was ashamed of myself, being so horrible to her..." you could've put something like: "I looked at her face (well, mine) and felt that I couldn't hold everything anymore..." you know! So that THEN she has th outburst. Maybe you could do the same for Shawna since THAT gesture should be extremely awkward for her or something...
Well that's it! I hope it helps on something though :p *prod prod* update! :D
IwishMyNameWasZoe chapter 13 . 6/9/2004
wow, this story really surprised me. i read the summary and thought, oh no, another lame story where two people switch bodies. but i decided to give it a chance and i'm glad i did! it's actually funny and the characters are believable. good job!
ako-si-feeyownah chapter 12 . 5/21/2004
i like it! write more!
NeWriter chapter 12 . 5/21/2004
Okay I was really entertained when I read this chapters, although I have to say some comments that may or may not help your story. I know we never take this is mind when we write but maybe you should put that Joey considers it a lost case to find true love, since the guy could be in another continent or half way across the planet. I like the way they couldn't tell Matt and Matt's characters as well. You seem to have a really good plot ( a common one too sometimes), but with a touch of originality in it as well. I suggest that you may put chapter with Matt's POV since it can give the story a nice effect. Other than that, I'll keep reading and I hope this helps you! Good luck ;)
MimiGhost chapter 11 . 4/12/2004
update soon
cutepixieeyes chapter 11 . 3/25/2004
I think your story is soo totally cool! OMG, Shawna is such a B* %! anyways, I think this story is awsome, you're doing a great job! I commend you for having the courage to put your story out there for other people to criticize. Well, great job! keep up the good work!
~cpe
Du Soleil Oriental chapter 11 . 3/5/2004
Fantastico...
Now update soon.
mzsparklez16 chapter 8 . 3/3/2004
this is a good story and all, but what does Josephine finding true love have to do with her cousin never being mean to her again (which is the reason why the spell was put on her in the first place) and who falls in love in less than two weeks?
JemG chapter 11 . 2/26/2004
Good story. It reads smoothly. Keep it up.
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