Reviews for Just Let Me Jaywalk
jab chapter 1 . 10/4/2003

I like :)
the cute lil dead girl chapter 1 . 9/29/2003
"sounds" like a weird contry song..
Inoperative chapter 1 . 9/29/2003
i second the whole thing!
AVIGON chapter 1 . 9/29/2003
The fucking point is that if you don't jaywalk, there's less chance of you getting hit by a car. I should know... LOL.

One thing: even if it's humor/parody, it would be nice if you looked a bit at the structure as well. :o)