Reviews for Battle of Love
frugale chapter 1 . 11/1/2003
Sypathic poem. Direct and effective.
Pharaoh's Wife chapter 1 . 10/22/2003
Great poem! Love is a battlefield.
JJR Meerraf chapter 1 . 10/15/2003
Short and sweet. The transition between the first and second paragraph was so sudden, it was like who! Great stuff though, and a great feeling was portrayed. Good work!
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 10/12/2003
I can relate better to this.. again I love how you say the same thing in different words & the ensing is great!
godawful teen-angst poetry chapter 1 . 10/7/2003
*g* very cute.

lyv
Anjeni Windsinger chapter 1 . 10/6/2003
Incredible poem, that last line was great.

Keep writing!
Hopes Forgotten chapter 1 . 10/5/2003
That's really good, flows well. Kind of sad.
wingless chapter 1 . 10/4/2003
this is pretty...and it makes the reader want to know the whole story of what happened. lovely.

thx for the reviews, sorry ti took so long for me to review u
Keep it 100 chapter 1 . 10/2/2003
Great piece. It was effective to start each line with "you".

Heart of the Sword
SpawnMeister666 chapter 1 . 10/2/2003
Short and sweet. Like it a lot.

Spawny
moment2moment chapter 1 . 10/1/2003
hey sugar! i love this poem. very very good. u learned well young grasshopper. and i can so realte to this. lol. i'll catch ya tomorrow...

and the reviewer is back! yay! w00t! lol

Arashi
xerarch chapter 1 . 9/29/2003
wow. i can relate so much. just broke up with my bf of 2 years recently and it's so true wht you're saying. the emotion you write with is awesome.

"You hardened my heart with your Battle of Love. " it can't be said any better than that .keep writing. this is awesome!