Oh, lovely poem, really romantic and sweet. Something everyone longs to experience...*applauds*
Thank you for reviewing my story "You Are The One", by the way. Waves, Weirdology.

What do you mean you can't write poetry? This is good! Really good! It's simple yet says a lot. I remember when I was where you are and I remember wanting that so badly. It's nice. I like it. I admire you for having the courage to post it. Good JOB! Thanks for the review, I really appreciate...a lot! I'll be on to read your fiction in a bit just not right now because I have a project due tomorrow that has to be finished TODAY so when I'm done that and am free, I'll surely be reading your fiction.

Good Job,

Love always,

A-Light-From-Your-Darkness

aw . . . that's so cute - The flow of the poem was pretty smooth and when you rhyme, it doesn't sound forced. Good job! Anytime you want me to review again, feel free to ask _

Nice poem.

W,

The Great, the Mighty, the Orc King

*sigh* I really enjoyed reading this...this is exactly how I feel most of the time...not at this moment because of this one thing...that happened between me and the guy that I felt that for...but I really like this and I wrote something similar called "Angel Without Wings". We have very close ways of expressing that topic...that "L" word that can make and break a lot of hearts. But I really really liked this. Wonderful!