|Reviews for To the Breaking of My Wings|
| Romantic Squirrel chapter 1 . 10/21/2003
Aw this is great. I am still jelous...sorry about the old comment, really you aren't that much older than me, but you will probably get wrinkles before me and die before me*Wait...put down th chainsaw* : )
| mmoonsshiner chapter 1 . 9/29/2003
at a lost for words, i scramble in the dark, scraping together fleeting emotions ,that swell and soar inside my heart, feeling out the strongest one, hidden along the base board, drawing it forward, but still my chest is clenched, my mouth moves but no words are spoken,the tears are more and louder.
*Ten lines inspired by poetry* may many more hearts be touched as mine have.
Nat The Unchanging Darkness,Keeper of Light
| Tenika D chapter 1 . 9/29/2003
So sad . . . It reminded me vaguely of a manga called Clover - perhaps you've read it. Your word selection is lovely, as is your imagery; I feel bad for the poor girl. But still, I get the feeling that it's not over for her . . . Does that make any sense? Probably not . . . ;)
| Jess Angel chapter 1 . 9/29/2003
Rather deep...I liked the structure again. Beautiful meaning of being able to 'fly' away somehow despite the broken or 'clipped' wings. Nice work.