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swirlygirl chapter 1 . 10/19/2003
great poem you are a great poet keep it up!
SweetGrape chapter 1 . 10/2/2003
Wow- in deep!

You express such a powerfully strong yearning just to be acknowledged; and presumably (since you say a relationship gone wrong) this is someone who cared about you before, but can't/won't even speak to you now.

All of the emotions are very strong in this piece.

'Attention and love' still love him, even after this. Like I said, in deep.

And just this one wish, your heart is content with this one look and these few words- all of the emotions are magnified here, it's great.
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 9/30/2003
great rhymes I love the repeating of that last line... altho its a tad confusing without the ending explaination
Nerf chapter 1 . 9/30/2003
i reli like this, the repition reli works.

well done!

XXNerfxx
JJR Meerraf chapter 1 . 9/30/2003
Great stuff, the rhyming was unbelievable. My favs list is full, which totally SUCKS! But believe me, I'm keeping this one remembered. As always, absolutely beautiful work.