i love it. especially when u italize ur words at certain areas. its different frm the way the usual poem goes in its style of writing. nice -

I obviously can't describe this as nearly as good as RisingBeauty did. So I'll only say I know what you mean! Whaw, I always hide away, I guess a lot of us do though. -_-()
I mean, a lot of us since there's about 12 percent of the population (Most of them writers! Or psychiatrists, hehe) that are most likely to pretend everything‘s all right and act as a pillar of strength when they‘re a pillar of salt (Or sumtin‘ like that). Called ‘Thinking Feeling’ types. Eh, very nice poem, you really did do well to depict the feeling of solitude. Congrats to you, I bow to your talent.

Thought it would be to cliche. You shocked me. Awesome poem, consider re-titling though... heheh... Damn.. "Nah, just a bit tired." You so nailed. Nailed existence in one poem. You talented thing you. Seriously. Can't sing enough praise.

hehe *oops* i forgot to italicise that one...i see what you mean about the ending, im often like that, i get a bit restless, startin off good then trailing off...i'll have to work on that :D check out some of my others that are up, or coming up in the near future- try Wandering Mind or Missing...but thanks for that review- it's really encouraged me!

Wow, this is really powerful... I especially like how you did the italics for what was going on inside. I thought the ending was a little weak though. You were building so much emotion up, and then you kind of let it go. My favorite line would have to be the first ones though "I'm fine, no honestly I'm fine/ Read in between the lines/ nah just a bit tired." That really hit me hard... for some reason... maybe because it's so true. I think "read in between the lines" should have been in italics though, but that's just me. I also loved "I was reading in between the lines, watching the expressions on your face." That was a really powerful line too. Your format in this was also really unique. When most people try stuff like this, they aren't able to capture the emotion as well as you did. Awesome poem, really.