Reviews for Long Time Coming formerly Living With Cameron |
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![]() ![]() Wowwwwww this chapter so nice |
![]() ![]() I love this story . Its so unique unlike others |
![]() ![]() ![]() I am way to old to admit this but I love me a highschool romance. And this one really is one of the best I've read. I love the chemistry, and all the supporting characters. The one qualm I have is the parents seem to be playing peekaboo throughout. Which I get is the point in the male protagonist' parents, but Kate's dad is seemingly loving but also totally absent till half way through. Where was he during the thanksgiving fiasco? And it's a little surprising she doesn't miss them more. But really that's my only point of criticism-if you wanna call it that. I loved how you didn't waste any page on unnecessaries. The moment that Kate leaves and Cam spies the prom dress is just breathtakingly haunting. And the thing I love most is how you really gently led them from hate to love hate to friendship to love. And I even enjoyed that Cam's womanizing lifestyle made hings complicated for him. That he couldn't immediately go from being friends to faithful lovers after one kiss was so so believable. I love how he tried to make out with other girls during the summer Kate was gone, but couldn't follow through on it with actual sex. That was believable. And the swoonworthy confession really made it all worthwhile. |
![]() ![]() ![]() definitely one of my new favorite stories! Thanks for a wonderful read! I thought all of the playful banter between Kate and Cameron was so clever and witty. The shots fired back and forth were awesome |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow dis is awesum totally enjoyed d rollarcoaster its fun .ii had great time reading it :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loved it! So cute! Megan :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() AWESOME story, well-written, with minor grammar mistakes. But, most of all, I really appreciate that you took the time to write past Kate and Cam getting together. So many times I've read stories that end with confessions but don't take the time to describe the shy moments, the awkwardness, the comfort, etc. that are felt in the next couple of days after the confession. This is so much better than any epilogue that shows '10 years later'. Thanks! |
![]() ![]() ![]() awww so sweet 3 :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love it, i love it,i love it! Please write more! Please i beg you, crying at your feet, write more! :P But great job, great story, great characters! :) |
![]() ![]() one word, awesome. |
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