Oohh, past tense correction.

"... For one brief second, Cameron was actually afraid; then it settles into a serious line."

It's supposed to be "settled."

It wasn't perfect, but it came around in the end and I really did like it.

Thanks for the experience

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i kind of see Jamie as that girl from Zenon:Z3 the little blonde one that loks like Zenon (cant remember her real name'S) mini me

you should go to google and look up the cast (:

this story's just great.:) and it's sad that you're not getting much reviews. anyway, the number's not really indicative of the quality of the story. it may not be present a unique plot but i still think that it was sweet and nicely worded. you gave cameron depth which doesn't happen always for the male protagonist.

congratulations. i enjoyed the story very much.:D

WOW. this was so cute and soo good ]

enjoyed it. thanks. an epilogue where they get married and have kids would be wonderful! :)

great so far from chapter 1 to 8. a few mistakes here and there but "she still had her bowling 'shows' on" was just so so so glaring i'm laughing my fuck!ng a$s of right now. LOL.

Hi idont think u know me but ur story is really good i cant stop reading it and dont stop writing

I LOVED THIS STORY! soo heart warming at the end. I found it really sweet because i have a character named Cameron in one of my stories and for some reason this cameron made me think of my cameron. heh any way I give this story a 11 out of 10. loved it. I'm going to recmomend it to my readers. ever thought of getting this published?

FAVORITE LIST!

~nehemie

Anyway, about two people who's lives gradually intertwine while under the same roof, who's improbable friendship grows into something more, something incredible.

I hope you know that it's 'about two people whose lives...' and 'under the same roof, whose improbable friendship...'

Just thought you should know. Grammar mistakes in the summary are a huge turnoff for a story.

It was actually realistic, no "straight up jump into a relationship within a week" like I'm used to reading. And I loved it this way so much better.

aw this is SUCH a sweet story- I cant believe I never read it before. It's so GOOD like man usually these high school stories are so predictable and not always well written but your story was woah! D

Sweet story. It was nice and I loved it!

aww wonderful story haha

Nicely written :)

xx

I loved this story, it is really cute and well-done:)