Reviews for God of Fear
Romantic Squirrel chapter 1 . 10/21/2003
WE! am done*frowns* I WANT MORE...NOW. Stiop correcting mine and write me more! or finish and then write more.
Tenika D chapter 1 . 10/6/2003
Very beautiful . . . I like this quite a lot. There format in the middle was especially interesting, and I think it really conveyed both the imagery and the emotion of the poem very well. An excellent job! *smiles* Really, you write wonderful stuff. .

Tenika Dargan
Alyx Bradford chapter 1 . 10/2/2003
Nicely done. I *really* like the style. Very unique, and it really works with the meaning of the poem. This piece is both descriptive and personal, which really helps to express the feeling behind it. Great job!
Aimee Raven chapter 1 . 10/2/2003
brilliant, really, very good, i liked it a lot. keep writing. and thnx for reviewing one of my poems, it makes my humble spirit very happy. hmm, i'm not so humble, more of a liar, lol, this is great. loved it!1 i totally agree with u. Twilight
Strina chapter 1 . 10/1/2003
I love it. And think it's a shame it's gotten so few reviews, but hardly anyone reviews poetry.
AntiPleasure chapter 1 . 10/1/2003
I agree with most of the things you said here. But I don't think we have to find God, we don't need someone to control our life that possibly can only see us but we can't see him/her/whatever heh.. my point is, if there is a God (hey that's one of my poem titles! *HINT* lol) I'm sure he/she/it would not be happy with the way the world is right now, and would change it if possible. I don't really believe in God, I mostly don't believe in religion. I'm pretty much an athiest/agnostic so I have my own morals in life. Anyways, enough about moi! I like how you did the

way

language

devotion

hunger

mind

need

EK WOW :D you're such a great writer, and I talk to much *stops myself* such good work

*Jenna*