|Reviews for First Crush|
| Miz E. Mak chapter 1 . 10/3/2003
wow. This is an awesome poem. The repitition drills this poem into my head everytime I read those lines over and over...it shows the pain you have suffered. it shows the thoughts that torment you. Awesome poem. simply incredible. I cannot believe that I am so lucky to be the first to review it.