|Reviews for White Clover Blossom|
| Romantic Squirrel chapter 1 . 10/21/2003
UH, AW This is so great. I love it.
| Tenika D chapter 1 . 10/6/2003
Excellent - I'd like to see more rhyming poetry from you in the future. . I like the material here - it was very bittersweet; a sad poem, but with a happy ending. A well written piece - once again, I compliment you.
| Darkdream1 chapter 1 . 10/5/2003
Beautiful poem... The symbolism conveys a very deep and slightly desperate message to me. There are only a few minor grammar errors, such as it's elastic bands, should be its (possessive instead of 'it is'). Also explore further applications of punctuation at the end of lines, such as : ; etc. Commas and periods are not always the way to true enlightenment _
| Melusine07 chapter 1 . 10/4/2003
I like it. It's beautiful. One criticism I have is that sometimes the rhyme scheme sounds a bit forced. Great poem, though, with excellent imagery.