Heh, so you been struck by how irritating rhymes and rules are! join the club lol, but you dont suck as a poet you're merely a freespirit poet _ the best type lol. Keep writing!

Yours in randomness!

RG

I like the brusqueness if this piece and the open honesty and frustration you have imprinted through your words. If you feel that you suck at poetry, than heaven help us when you get good.

Thanks for posting

Lowell

I like your poem.

Love it... How very true! I'm usless at rhyming to... I just write it down as it comes out of my head. Good poem. Like the thought that women invented poetry whilst men invented the rules!