go kick his ass girl! slam that stupid ugly motherfuker in jail. let him rot there forever!

Wow, i love this story. Its really good. It was pretty clear to me what it was about, but thanks for the explanation anyways!
-Tiffany

Go you! Wow, this powerful!

Just watch some of your syllable patterns. Whilst the rhyme in this is form is quite important, don't try too hard to make it rhyme perfectly.

It is a very strong poem. You have used a lot of metaphors without making the content too explicit, as is the nature of rape and suchlike. Good for you!