Reviews for legacy
soulspring chapter 1 . 10/9/2003
nicely described! it's quite a coincidence that i come upon this just after reading about him last night.
La Solange chapter 1 . 10/7/2003
Three, no four cheers for you. This is so good... can I PLEASE have your talent? *begs*

FF
glitterjewele chapter 1 . 10/5/2003
wow, i'm afraid i don't know who Akhenaten is, but this was a very powerful piece of poetry nonetheless. the format was great and added a lot to the effect. the one name at the end blew me away AWESOME conclusion there. :) i like it muchly, kudos!
Keep it 100 chapter 1 . 10/4/2003
You did a great job on this. Akhenaten was brave when he tried to change the old Egyptian ways. Cool poem.

Heart of the Sword
CoolBeans18s chapter 1 . 10/3/2003
Wow! You put this so well. Akhenaten was a very interesting person - very brave to try and change the whole Egyptian culture (practiacally) with his new religion. Great poem!

CoolBEans18s
Miz E. Mak chapter 1 . 10/3/2003
This poem RoCkEd! I love it...it is beautiful, it is truthful, it is full of fact placed so gentally in it that the beauty protects it.

Simply incredible. write on!
Alyx Bradford chapter 1 . 10/2/2003
La! Nicely done. Funny how the Egyptians had monotheism before anyone else, and the original Jews were henotheists... I like the way this poem makes its point. Lovely.
mizu no kokoro chapter 1 . 10/2/2003
wow. i...

ah...

dunno...

what...

well...

um...

(in english: great poem!)