Reviews for Holy Land
inoperative chapter 1 . 10/24/2003
you know dude, we should get your work published! it's brilliant! this one is especially great. i'm serious about this - your poetry and songs are should really consider getting some published...

you should

excellent as always

caden, alec and obi-wan: *agrees*
Star-Gir1 chapter 1 . 10/9/2003
Wow, your poem is very powerful! You are right, about people that don't realize that we are all equals. :) Very descriptive. Keep up the wonderful work!