Reviews for Haiku
FattyButt chapter 1 . 1/5/2004
It a beautiful Haiku...I just started doing them myself, so don't read too much inot this when I say...I thought traditional Haikus were of the rhythem ..5...7...5...this one is 5..7..6...Like I said I don't know anything about them except this much...There might be others ways...I guess this is more of a question than a statement, so pls let me know. I looked it up to write one, but if theres more than just th count then plz let me know...UGH I rambled on...Thanks it was beautiful.
Hail the Warrior chapter 1 . 1/1/2004
Good job for your first one. I have uploaded more of my story and will do more tomorrow. There is a special thing for you in this chapter.
Keep it 100 chapter 2 . 11/15/2003

~Heart of the Sword
Keep it 100 chapter 1 . 11/15/2003

~Heart of the Sword
AnnaSun chapter 1 . 10/3/2003

That was deep. I liked it :)

Please RR my poems if U can.

Thanks for sharing :)
Tichondrius chapter 1 . 10/3/2003
Deep! its good ill tell you that
Miz E. Mak chapter 1 . 10/3/2003
such a beautiful haiku for the first time writing one! That is awesome...I doubt that the first haiku I wrote was anywhere near that good (I didn't even post any until I felt they were "good"). I hope that you continue to write in this fun art of haiku.

write on!
Eternity's Secret chapter 1 . 10/3/2003
That is so true! Good job!