Reviews for Red File: Deception
IhearVoices chapter 1 . 5/10/2005
BEAUTIFUL! I love how it's just her thoughts, and how they repeat themselves, just as they would with a normal person-she's not stereotypical...good job! 10/10
Larania chapter 1 . 4/11/2000
That was poetic, although I couldn't see what the title had to do with the tale. I've had things like that go through my head often enough.
Jonathan Urban chapter 1 . 4/11/2000
Great piece...chilling and very realistic...shows the despair one can have when contemplating the ultimate farewell.
Denise chapter 1 . 4/11/2000
Short and sweet...plumbed the depths really well...Deexxx
SomeoneFromTheList chapter 1 . 4/11/2000
I hope this means you will commit suicide just like your buddy Lar!
Jonathan Urban chapter 1 . 4/11/2000
Strong piece and very well formed. I wrote one about suicide myself...seems like death is something on a lot of people's minds when writing...