Wow, this is exactly how I feel when I write. I feel like I;m letting go of the emotions I'm holding back and that I can truley express myself in this way. This poem is very good!

This is definitly one of my favorites. It was very good. I liked the raw emotion surrounding this poem. Nice Job!

Nikki

Very cool. You create some good atmosphere. I like it because I think that most writers could relate to this poem in some form. Your choice of words not only has good rhythm but also rhyme. In my opinion it is very hard to compose a good rhyming poem and have it follow a beat.