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Unfairy chapter 1 . 8/23/2004
ooh, nice, i feel rather similar to that flower
LostInReality chapter 1 . 12/12/2003
I like this one. If i think about it the flower could symolise something else.
Also in your other poem 'a perfect world'i forgot to say how i liked how you emphasised the bits (crime, haote , love, patience etc) by putting them on seperate lines. It gives the poem a nice effect