|Reviews for Thin Layer Of Beauty|
| A Phantom Stranger chapter 1 . 10/12/2003
:) I am thoroughly impressed, great poem, and an original take on an age old tale well done, one thing in the first stanza I noticed a spelling mistake carboard, you are missing the d cardboard, but a minor error in an otherwise inspiring poem ;)
| Retta chapter 1 . 10/4/2003
Very sweet and well writen. All too true!