This is good- the tone about romantiszied suicide was faint, but there. It was good. Nice work.-Yin

deep. yes, i think that suicide is definitely over romanticized as a way out of misery; all it is is a culmination of misery. how can that lead you out of it? you portray the depressed feeling of hoplessness well. i particularly liked the phrase 'cannot even look at it/ but i know it is there'. it shows how some people think about their life, that there' s an unattainable silver lining, when sometimes there really isn't one in sight, maybe not even one in existence. this was great.

::emphatic clapping::

RM