|Reviews for Color is Something That Comes in a Box|
| tawnyfawn chapter 1 . 10/5/2003
oh. this is sad.
it just...just...i dunno, im not good with words. its sad. i love the last paragraph/verse thing. this is so good. thanx for writing this, i liked it. loved it. sad. so sad...
| glitterjewele chapter 1 . 10/5/2003
wow, the simplicity of this one blew me away. i think it's because it's such a huge contrast to such a serious and important issue. the title/repeating line is amazing. it intrigued me right off the bat, and then when i read the poem and it took on another meaning, it was even more powerful. *love* all the two-word short lines leading up to the repeating line, they did wonders for the rhythm and the impact of the piece overall. especially at the end: "he grows/he changes/he learns/he's confused/he's hurt" ~ it does such a great job tracking all the complex emotions he's going through. awesome piece, chica.