I think you should edit it by updating those chapters as you go, and since I read this recently, you look like you're almost done!

I really like this story because it is a cliche. I haven't read cliches in a while, so this was great! :)

Congrats on finishing your story! It was terrific! I loved it :)

This is too cute :)) good job!

Pleeeeease leave it alone. It's amazing the way it is. Sure there are grammatical errors but siriously (see what I did there) dude, it's amazing the way it is. No offence but If you re-wrote it it may not be as good as it is now.

Your story was great! But there are some parts that I couldn't understand because of grammatical errors or wrong punctuation marks. Personally, I think that you should write a new version, because it was kind of sudden when Nick and Caelyn said the three words after just two or three days of dating. You could develop their relationship a whole lot more. You're a great author, so PLEASE keep writing! :D

Awwww. If only my life could be as amazing as this. Everything was written so beautifully, and I love all the characters... except Kyle and Jan of course.

love it sooooo much wish peeps would make more books like this about famouse peeps and local peeps together lol!11

oh. take that, Jan.

great. I love a character that can keep her cool. These days, too many of the main characters are spineless. :)

aw! the story was AWSOME!

I loved it!

TEHEE! dont rewrite it babe! ITs FAntastica! Please have a sequel! YAYAYAYA! I totally love nick and caelyn together! There fantastic! I want another one please!

ooh. like it. woops, i meant loved it. great story:))

hey :) i have to say, this story is great. some typos but its still great. :D to answer your questions, a re-write would be interesting, like developing the plot and characters more. but if you do make a re-write, it would be better if you start a whole new story rather than editing per chapter. :) anyways, awesome work. good luck in your writing :)

Your first chapter was hooking and I was into your story at the very beginning.

And I loved every little piece of it.

Caelyn's character is refreshing yet breathtaking.

I love the main character being not perfect but everyone loves her and she's near perfect if you will. and that's exactly what Caelyn is.

Nick.

If I could describe what I think about him in one word..

sexy.

hott maybe?

a hint of cute?

love every single part of him (:

Wow! Amazing story! I absolutely loved it! Please write a sequel if you have the time!

Aryelle