Reviews for Morning mist and Sorrow
AntiPleasure chapter 1 . 11/4/2003
Wow, another great poem. "Little particles of possibility" That line really caught my attention, I don't know why, just sort of stood out and seemed true to me. I liked how you played around with bits and pieces of colors and imagery like how you described the misty sky and such - such a good job.

Misty Woods chapter 1 . 10/7/2003
This poem is simply beautiful! I especially liked the part where you said

'The sky is awash of pastels

Gold tinted peach blossoms spread wide

While swirls of radiant cadium hues blended beyond distinction

pattern the river below as mist still prowl along the bay'. It caught my attention right away. I LOVE IT! :)