Reviews for THE RED ROOM
topyxyz chapter 1 . 3/8/2011
This is amazing!
olgite the squidgal chapter 1 . 7/11/2009
You gave this short story an ominous atmosphere which I like since it kept me off-balance as to what was inside the Red Room. It's also great the way you've captured how menacing the unknown is from a child's point of view.
Lima Beans chapter 1 . 7/20/2006
it does need some touch ones but not alot alomst nonexistant really but there still there. and could u try making alittle more sence in it too? i was alittle lost in some parts like when Tania went to open HER bedroom door u said THE door and not her. thats just one but other than that it was fantastic! my heart was racing when hers was and everything. u have a nice style just a few touch ups so its easier to follow and it will be even more perfect than it is now
Monique chapter 1 . 7/22/2003
This was a good story and I really enjoyed taking the time to read it.
Lil1 chapter 1 . 10/20/2002
I thought it was something he he...you know...coz I read some stories like this, same red room, same noise, only ending up with the mom being a prostitute-anyway, that's just my dirty mind speaking-NICE STORY! ENDING REALLY SURPISED ME-I GOT A LITTLE SCARED THOUGH! I LOVE GETTING SCARED THAT'S WHY I LOVE YOUR STORIES! Looks at list-oh, this is the last general fiction? Pls. write more!
Lee Anna 10 chapter 1 . 8/19/2000
WOW! This rocks!
Denise Willis chapter 1 . 4/11/2000
The end of this surprised me...I like to be surprised!Deexxx
jai chapter 1 . 4/11/2000
whoa, you keep getting better and better!I am in awe!

Man, you should find some more places to "publish",I'm sure there's more people who will want to read this!
netshark chapter 1 . 4/11/2000
Strange...very strange...btw, do you write professionally?