|Reviews for THE RED ROOM|
| topyxyz chapter 1 . 3/8/2011
This is amazing!
| olgite the squidgal chapter 1 . 7/11/2009
You gave this short story an ominous atmosphere which I like since it kept me off-balance as to what was inside the Red Room. It's also great the way you've captured how menacing the unknown is from a child's point of view.
| Lima Beans chapter 1 . 7/20/2006
it does need some touch ones but not alot alomst nonexistant really but there still there. and could u try making alittle more sence in it too? i was alittle lost in some parts like when Tania went to open HER bedroom door u said THE door and not her. thats just one but other than that it was fantastic! my heart was racing when hers was and everything. u have a nice style just a few touch ups so its easier to follow and it will be even more perfect than it is now
| Monique chapter 1 . 7/22/2003
This was a good story and I really enjoyed taking the time to read it.
| Lil1 chapter 1 . 10/20/2002
I thought it was something he he...you know...coz I read some stories like this, same red room, same noise, only ending up with the mom being a prostitute-anyway, that's just my dirty mind speaking-NICE STORY! ENDING REALLY SURPISED ME-I GOT A LITTLE SCARED THOUGH! I LOVE GETTING SCARED THAT'S WHY I LOVE YOUR STORIES! Looks at list-oh, this is the last general fiction? Pls. write more!
| Lee Anna 10 chapter 1 . 8/19/2000
WOW! This rocks!
| Denise Willis chapter 1 . 4/11/2000
The end of this surprised me...I like to be surprised!Deexxx
| jai chapter 1 . 4/11/2000
whoa, you keep getting better and better!I am in awe!
Man, you should find some more places to "publish",I'm sure there's more people who will want to read this!
| netshark chapter 1 . 4/11/2000
Strange...very strange...btw, do you write professionally?