Reviews for Unguarded
Romantic Squirrel chapter 1 . 10/21/2003
Ya, it sucks, I know. I am sorry. Hey this is a great poem, and I love the part were you call him a basterd, fits so will. And probably more than true.
Tenika D chapter 1 . 10/18/2003
Very good . . . It probably shouldn't have, but the final line made me grin. It's very bittersweet in a sad poem, and well put in. Once again, you have your wonderful ending line! Bravo! *claps* I apologize for my scarceness - I guess life decided to catch up with me. Kind of annoying how it does that, ne? Anyhoo, I'm behind on your work by eleven poems - I have some catching up to do!

Tenika Dargan
Eternity's Secret chapter 1 . 10/12/2003
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 10/12/2003
very sad.. almost made me cry.. I can relate... love the format & its a great poem... i love hte last line tho cuz its so true!