Reviews for coffee
painted eyes chapter 1 . 12/20/2008
This was creative and I love poetry that has two images intwined (like you have the coffee and the sleeping.) I liked how you showed the difference between 'old' coffee and the 'new' coffee- by the by, I agree with there being so many choices... when all you want is a coffee...

The last line is so personal, and so heartbreaking to read, this poem really impressed me.

Keep up the good work.

~painted
DyingAppleCandle chapter 1 . 11/8/2008
Isn't it sad to loose someone? i like the sleeping bit, because its so special when you sleep. Pretty, sad, wistful
Jonah chapter 1 . 9/5/2004
I like this one, it has such longing in every line, and a vein of anguish just running underneath the entire poem.
Very emphatic.