Are you going to finish it. You should. I have been sporadically checking the story to see if you had updated it for months. you left it at a major cliff hanger. You should finish it. its good.

Holy heck finally. I could hardly stand reading it was so sad. I really hope you consider finishing it is really good. You can't leave a story like this unfinished. Maybe just an epilogue? Update soon. Please. :)

Missed this story so much that I re-read it again... please update :(

That was a major cliff hanger you pulled there. You must update soon! by the way your story is very good.

been reading nonstop for an hour... this is just... WOAH.

Grrrrrr...update much?! please! ;(

I think you died.

Please Update. I'm gunna beg until you do.

Omfg. You have to update. Prettttttttty please? Its been 5 years. Please? I really want to know what happens next. Please.

Update soon please. I love this story. I hate her father, he's a twisted f**k. I can see why Cameron would want to do that to protect her family, I would do the same thing if my life was like that. I hate her dad so much

Daww,cliffhanger! Keep going with the story,please and thank you :)

Found this story via . it's very engaging so far in terms of keeping things interesting. Keep up the swell work.

i know its been years but please please add more soon.

i love the eminem fact lyrics threw in there. i started laughing as soon as i read it and started singing the song and now my parents think im like sex obssesed. lol

Aw, what a depressing family life... Make sure that descriptions don't sound too cliche, though. I don't really know if you have, but chances are, you haven't been in this level of an abusive family. However, adding the right amount of distinguishing description and mystique can help the reader believe that you HAVE.

Incest, though... You'll have to explain that, there. At the moment I'm a little perplexed. . caught my attention, though. Good beginning chapter!