Reviews for Shatter
Incubabe chapter 1 . 11/3/2003
Whoa! This is some of your best work - why have I been away for so long?

I think I might take you up on that offer of marriage and Mexico - do they let women get married over there?

Missed your poetry and this is a prime example of why. Hope I catch up with it all this week.

Great stuff; stunningly beautiful yet heart-wrenchingly sad. I nearly cried...

Diana x
Miamouse chapter 1 . 10/15/2003
I wouldn't presume to know what this is about. Although if I had written it I'd say it was about anorexia. But that's just me... the words such as 'celluloid' 'brittle bones' and the phrase 'everything's in angles' made me think that.

The whole thing has a fragile feeling. Like the other poems I've read of yours, very emotive.

Alaurei chapter 1 . 10/7/2003
Wow, I feel your pain. Hm, I understand this poem. Doe sit ahve anything to do with...suicide? Anything by chance? If not, I'm totally lost because I've been there, I think. LoL xD Trying to understand this.

I love this line:

Everything’s in angles

I never knew that I could be

So fragile—

A pinch could set me bleeding

That, is the best line(s) I've ever heard. I swear, I totally understand. Every little tiny thing, makes a huge differecne in my life. So, to think at that, how about the big things. 0_0 whoa, dont' wanna go there. Anyway, great poem and I'll talk to you later.

-Nickel City

"To infinity, and beyond!"