I like it! More please, it is so hard to find stories that potray lizardmen this good!

Oh...I hope you continue this story one day. I would read it. The beginning was good, not too mysterious since it explained just enough for the reader to know. I could only find one structural thing that threw me off...
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"Warriors, fearing for their live or ready to deal out death, stormed by the lizardman." Wording: 'live' should be replaced by 'lives' since 'warriors' was plural. Just to get everything to agree.
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Well, I hope you continue to work on this story. And I wanted to thank you for your support in the past. I have a new story I am working on and if you would give me your opinion I would be most grateful. Hope to read more from you soon!
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~bless.

pretty good start... a little short. My only question is:

If Renji is such a powerful fighter, why can't he break free?

Basically, I thik that to make this chapter better, you could have provided a bit of history, like how Renji got there, and what is holding him back? Is it magic? Or is it amazingly terrible odds that even a fightere of his status couldn't hope to overcome? Or is it something completely different, like some sort of honor code?

Great start, though. You could make a good story grow from this, just try not to litter it with too many of Renji's duels. They shouldn't be the main focus of the story. I myself made the mistake of too many fight sceenes at the begining of my story. At first they are cool, but eventually, no matter how well you write them, no matter how you vary the type of fighting in between them, they do get old. I can't wait to see where it goes, though! Update soon!