You have absolutely no meter or rhye scheme, but I like the premise.
you may not remember me; I guess you reviewed me some time ago. I don't check the email account that this account reports reviews to. I have another account up here, one that all my friends know and that I post most of my things on.
Anyways, thank you (belatedly) for the review, and if you could check out some of the stories by my friends RonethDragon and JazzHeart, I'm sure that they would appreciate it.

who was this to?

Wow! You've already written so~ many poems! Well, I read only a few and they're really good. This one is the newest so I review here. - Must say, I like it. Seams you really think much about life and stuff. That's good ... of course. :-) Thankies for your review by the way. But ... uhm ... what exactly is a "Show-Schriftsteller-Block"? I thought it is something positive so I was happy 'bout it. :D

So ... keep on writing! - And have a pretty day. Bye, Bishou

Answers the call of one begging for a review...

Very very good... I love the concepts and this flowed very well...

~C Shot~

(can you review my latest?)

It's great. It's so true, I think almost everyone can realate. The repetition really works for it. Good work!