Great story... I love your characters and the plot!

Oh and this is an AWESOME story, but the guy should apologize more for wht he did to Aemilia at the start

Update?

I wish there was more to read of this story. It was really good!

What will Zedu do I wonder, and will the romans attack?

This is getting good. Please update soon :D

I absolutely love your story. My favorite character has to be Roles. He reminds me of the little brother I've always wanted. The other children are just mad becuase theyre not as cute as he is! Lol, but seriously I think your story is fabulous. I have lots of questions, though. Why does Sama get abused by her husband? How come Zedu at least try to get to know her husband? Does the village know about the Romans? All of these questions and more! I sense drama coming up in the next chapter. As for the technical parts, I didn't find anything wrong, but then again I might have missed something. Please update soon! Btw, you are now one of my favorite authors and this is one of my favorite stories.

—TheElements23

I love the story.. please continue it again.

I'm sorry but i have read 12 of these chapters and to tell you the truth, your grammar is deplorable, your knowledge of the Greek and ancient world in which you are basing your characters lives is way off base with language,morals and common life. The swear words that you use do not pertain to this era and as a writer you should basically change this from a past story to a present story of some kind because it jumps on and off the radar and reads like a NYC life novel. For that I'm sorry.

I am absolutely hooked on this story, and am really hoping you'll update soon...it would be a shame to let such a great story go unfinished!

I'm very happy you updated. I have been following your story for a very long time and continue to check back on it, even for more than a year now. I am sorry to hear that you have not been feeling well lately, I hope things are looking better for you. Your story is very good; I love historical fictions. You have included a lot of very nice detail. I have not read much about the Dacians before. You make it easy to learn about this culture through your story. Please continue to write more-I will continue to check back for it!

This story is brilliant, very creative and powerful. You're a wonderful auther. But when is Daizus going to learn that Aemilia isn't a common farm girl, but a powerful Roman General's daughter?

I really like this plot and what I think really intrigued me was how you knew so much information. You made the story...um...ligit! Its really nice to read a story where there is some knowledge to the tale. Good job! :D

Wow. I just found this story today and I read it all in one sitting. It grabbed me by the collar and wouldn't let go- it's so good! I was looking foward to reading the newly updated chapter 14, only to find that it was an Author's Note. Needless to say, I was gutted!

Looking foward to the next update!

I love this story! This update soon!