So cute, I love how you added the bad past with zack. Can't wait for more, and please update soon!

oooh i can not wait for another update-

(realizing that it has not been updated for almost 9 years or so)

i'm not ready to wait for another update ! ;A;/

i will support you (through prayers) so you can update this! ;w;/

Pourquoi m'observez-vous? Qu'est-ce vous voient-il?

should probably be

Pourquoi m' observez-vous? Qu'est-ce que vous voyez?

(The last sentences says What is it that you see?) (if that's what you intended then that's a better way to say it)

What was the picture? You didn't say what it was. (Awesome story so far, by the way)

when i finished this i wanted to cry! want to know why? because it looks like there is so much more to come but you haven't updated it in, what was it? SEVEN FREAKING YEARS. so i think its kinda safe to say this is over... BUT IT WAS SO GOOD! I LOVE THIS STORY!

There wasn't even any, you know... touchy feely going on. D

...anyway, you probably wont even read this (7 YEARS!), so I will go wallow in sadness for a while...

But to end on a happy note - yay! i love this story!

I will be your bodyguard,

You can be my long lost pal ...

I just thought of that song reading this.

WILL YOU UPDATE!

its in french

sucks for him

Rawr! I love this story it is amazing I have never read anything like it! You make the french guy seem so uber sexy!

It looks nice, but why didn't you continue it in, 4-5? years?

Oh, update! This story seems really interesting!

Well, the teen drama doesn't impress me, but I can understand how important it is to Zacks character. Ah...are these two going to introduce themselves to each other at some point? Using names? There's been a thanksful lack of delving into his music tastes and his skateboarding, thank you so much. It would make an interesting segue later though to see what Love interest #1 makes of his hobbies though.

I'm very interested to know how our grieving frenchman handles the age difference...though isn't Europe a bit more lenient about those?

I'm showing my age I think. Teen!angst and drama don't have the same appeal. I want to see Zack Grow up a little bit. At least emotionally. How do you have an adult relationship when you're biggest worry is if your Guidence counselor catches you? LMAO. Er...perhaps "adult relationship" is a little...lot...premature.

when you said 'red black hair' you mean black hair with red highlights?

NO! Y did u STOP! IT WUZ GETTIN GOOD! Plz take it up againand update? ITS A GREAAT STORY! PLZ? I LOVE UR STOORY!

hey, its been like 4 years, did ya die? coma, amnesia?

well, i just wanted to say

happy holidays and update dude!

interesting story!... i love french men...lol