hey it's really good so far! Actually... I haven't read it yet. A bit too long for my taste... but I like the title! And summary!

Hey! It's been a long, long time since you updated. But then again, you definitely make up for it in length. I mean, twenty something pages is definitely enough to make up for the wait. I didn't know that there were other relationships like Keir and Brams going on. Then again, we are reading it through Toni's eyes and she is definitely ignorant and stubborn. I like how she gets to 'go' out again but I don't understand why she was exactly suppose to go. Was it all because of the opium? If it was, then was that all? Was there some other thing to it? It seems like she did learn, in the end of the chapter, that she was over reacting. Now, that's learning a lesson for ya. I couldn't believe that she had missed 9/11. Then again, she has been without outside contact for some time. How long after 9/11 was this trip taken? Long after or just recently? I didn't quite get the reason why that Doctor was killer. What did he do? Why did he have to be killed? All he did was give him opium right? How did Toni remember all information? Was there something that was done for her to remember that? Tell me 'cause I definitely want to learn how to do that. I could definitely use that. Alright, update soon!

~VAMP

OMG! I can't believe what Bram did to her. I understand that he was just tryin to help her out but come on. Do you really think that would have worked? I wanna know if he got the idea from some therapy book and which one. Cause in my world doing that wouldn't of had a positive effect on me, quite the opposite. I want to know why Kenneth is there? He obviously isn't taking the information too well to begin with so why have him there? I can't believe that Gary gave him the pills. Does he give them to everyone? Or just special people like Toni and Kenneth. I can't believe that you left us hanging like that. You better hope that people don't come to your door with their pitchforks and torches to burn you done because of the cliff hanger. Please try realy hard to update soon or at least update on your website on how far you are on the chapter to give the readers an idea of when you may be done. If you do this I'm sure that people won't come burn your house down or complain or stuff like that. Awesome chapter and 8 pages is not short, quite the opposite.

~Vamp

this is still really write more soon!thanks!_

this is an amazing story. I look forward to your next update. I'm really curious about what is going on with Bram and his death of Erik cam eas a shock and it really took all I had not to up the good work..sory I don't have much to say :)

yeah...a new chappie...and a long one to boot!
first of all I wanted to thank u for ur mail...I honestly didn't think u'd answer me...makes me really happy!
also thank u for putting me on ur update alert...
too bad that u post the new chapters only once a month...
how long are u gonna write this story anyway? ur still at book one...and u plan doing 5, right? ah...that is just too long for me to wait ...like I sad...I'm so addicted and I can't help it...
when are u making toni a vampire? is it going to happen in this book?
still, loved this chappie...keep up the awesome work of yours!
and maybe update just a teensy bit earlier...that would honestly make my day!
*b*

I love your story, very imaginative and embracing.
Nice plot, so far I've nothing bad to say about it.
have you considered publishing it?
I feel that you could go far with this story as the ideas of a vampire life like this is very original.
so anyway keep up the good work :)

please I need more...u have to update asap...
I'm totally addicted to ur story
there really aren't any words to describe how amazing it is...
where do u get those mind-blowing ideas? Everything seems so realistic...
whilst reading the chapters, I got utterly spell bounded ...I kept reading up till late into the nite
so, please don't disappoint me and
post the next chappie...thanks!

i liked on writing the next chapters please!

it was a wicked story,well very interesting actually.i never thought anyone would come up with an idea like write the next chapter! !_

That was once agian a wonderfully written chapter. I was so happy for Toni, she finnaly gets a happy chapter, the vampire hunters were kinda creepy but cool.

Great story! I can't wait for the next chapter.

Wow, another very angesty chapter, but it does have some very high points. Like she finaly meets Bram agian. YEA. I was really depressed when she was so subservant to Kama, but then she saw Bram which made me happier. Not to mention she did manage to finish that list of good things about herself, so she is growing as a person. I am wondering what the heck the king is thinking, I mean turning her to prevent the prophecy. HA.
Oh and quick and random observation that I just now came to, is it that she isnt decended from the one who made the king a vampire but is that preson reborn? Well keep writing I do love this story.
Jade Elf

WOW! That's about all I can say right now. WOW! Amazingly done and with a certain flare. This is an amazing story! Please keep updating! I'm completely out of words. Please continue with this amazing story!
*Yokan Ookami*

Have you evey thought of publishing this? Your story is wonderful. More people would be likely to read it in hardcover. Please keep writing!
~Sadie