Reviews for Leaving the Light
Jade Elf chapter 38 . 4/30/2004
Another wonderful job but man all the runing around poor Toni had to do. I really feel bad for her. The last scene with her apologising to the king really got me down. I hope that latter on she regains some of her spirit. I cant wait to find out what well come of most of the other slaves deciding that she is their leader. Maybe even a revolution? I hope so. well keep up the great writing.
Jade Elf
Sydney's Cat chapter 38 . 4/29/2004
Wow... that's a really good story. We really enjoyed it. The way you portray your characters makes them seem lifelike, and your use of imagery is astounding. We could almost see the places you were describing. Please keep writing and update soon!
armyelf03 chapter 36 . 2/5/2004
Great chapter (as always). It's a cliff-hanger! Oh, please update soon!
Jade Elf chapter 36 . 2/5/2004
how could you leave it off there. That is a mean trick, not that I dont do the same on the rare occasion. Another top notch job. Keep up the wonderful writing.
Razor Butterfly chapter 35 . 1/14/2004
Yay! Story updates. I sneaked a peek at your story on your geocities account.
:: grins ::
I love it 100%!
'Till next time,
Keep up the good work,
And don't let your muse take a break,
Alyssa (Razor Butterfly)
Jade Elf chapter 29 . 12/17/2003
OMG your story is so good, the mystery elements are superb. Romance is top notch, i mean the tension between bram and toni is so much fun. The element of vampires just makes it so good. I love you story. Please keep writing, and sadly no I didnt know before toni that kami was the murderer.
Jade Elf
Razor Butterfly chapter 29 . 12/9/2003
It's hard to believe you don't have that many reviews when this story is actually really good. I love it! I was reading it at school too on my lap top, but (shh!) Anyways, I bid you good luck and await for you to publish your next chapter to the story.
Delanie chapter 20 . 11/13/2003
OMG! Its getting so good (once again)! Very nice. Please update soon! I must know what happens to Toni! Does she find out who the person was? And what happens when she seems Bram again, after what she heard that he did? I must know! lol. You can take your time, and build the suspense, but please update soon. Byes
nina-101 chapter 20 . 11/10/2003
this is getting good plz update as soon as possible
Fantasy4eva chapter 2 . 11/9/2003
All right I had only read until here,this story is nice,I really wanted to continued reading it but who know what my mother will do to me,so I guess I can only continue reading tommorow.
nina-101 chapter 13 . 10/13/2003
plz continue this is getting very interesting.
armyelf03 chapter 2 . 10/9/2003
hey! it's me again. D. I promise you won't regret coming to fp! keep updating!
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