Reviews for Knowing Better
Essie chapter 1 . 7/31/2007
This poem was to meant to be said out loud. I like the way the words flow almost like a melody.

Your use of repetition makes it like one train of thought merging into another.

Anyways, I really like it. )
Farferrie chapter 1 . 10/20/2003
I can picture this whole thing in my head. I can even taste the blood in the kiss and see the flash of the light on the blade. Nicely done. You humble me, sis.

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Not quite so cheesy now. So sue me, I'm running low.