Reviews for He Punks Me Not
iammisspedia chapter 25 . 5/12/2010
Finally finished it! My gad. I am so happy for them. Really hope they go and have a beautiful future! :D

Nice job!
iammisspedia chapter 2 . 5/11/2010
aww. uhm, Andrew's sweet.. hehe.

I'm gonna finish reading this.. woot woot!
vixeneye chapter 25 . 5/11/2010
you know i cried on the last part. T.T hay, im hoping that they will be together but no, it's not. :( i want a sequel. huhu. but i super love it. i'm super carried away in the story..
browneyedcolly chapter 25 . 5/4/2010
i really like the ending. :]
Ms Scarlett chapter 25 . 4/19/2010

just wow

This story was amazing, i didn't over crowd and smother you with anything and pulled me in from the beginning. i am glad that the ending was sappy and was rather realistic, despite how much i wanted Stine to just grab her and make out with her :D
TunglMed chapter 25 . 4/14/2010
wow, that was awesome. i actually really think that was a brilliant ending, because you're right, it would have been too cheesey if they had just made up and got together. but i'm glad they were friends again at the end :)

haha yeah she was an idiot, going after Oz when she had Stine - Stine is way cooler, i want green hair ;p

well, good luck with other stories,

CallMeAutumn chapter 25 . 4/11/2010
*added to favorites!

Well. This story has left me in tears but thats okay. After some thought I decided the really was the best ending/ the only one that would really work well-as sad as it was. But I'm happy they're friends I guess now. As you say there might not be a sequel Im just going to picture them bumping into each other after a long time b/c it saddens me to think it they just end here.

Thanks for the great story, I loved reading it.
CallMeAutumn chapter 21 . 4/11/2010
Great chapter! I can't believe I'm so close to the end.

But ugh! Why is she telling ppl it's a date? She needs to get over Oz. -_- Stine's so much better.

& poor stine. :( he'll probably be upset when he hears.
CallMeAutumn chapter 12 . 4/11/2010
After this chapter, I like stine!

But I still can't decide wheter I want riz to end up with oz or him.
CallMeAutumn chapter 1 . 4/11/2010
I'm excited to read this story

although Charisse's wailing about being like Oz is annoying :p
charmedblush chapter 25 . 4/10/2010
Your story is amazing. Wow. Enough said...

Wait- Not to annoy you... but ...sequel?
Lemoncheesekake chapter 25 . 4/4/2010
Fabulous story...I really love it... By the time I had finished this story, I had tears welling up in my eyes and two minutes later I cried...I CRIED! I NEVER cry over stories but...AHH...

Good job! I really love Stine...I used to dislike Charisse first but...well...she's kinda' like me...I realized that I began to like her too -winks-

I dunno whether I want a sequel or not...I mean I want more Stine and Riz stuff but sequel kind of makes the story lose its charm and all that...

Once again, good job.
Thundaga.blitz chapter 9 . 4/2/2010
Our silence and staring was really getting on my nerves and I was growing impatient. I quickly grew tired of the silence.

"I didn't steal your wallet, you know." I said defiantly.

"Vie could have killed her!" I interjected hotly.

"You have to understand that she has a hot temper."

"That's no reason at all!" I declared. "She should be suspended! We should so tell the principal that Vie attempted an assault on me and my cousin." Even to me it sounded pretty whacked.


Does it actually just jump to that? It's kinda confusing and seems kinda wrong. But I dunno if it's just me or what...
Juliet chapter 1 . 4/1/2010
Hello, there. It's Juliet from A Drop of Romeo. I'm pleased to say that your story was inducted onto the ADoR site. Here's the raving review:

The character development throughout the story was pretty well done-I learned to love the characters, and their dialogue often had me laughing to myself. They have their quirks and were definitely fleshed out. The story does things to your heart, especially the ending...


unwitten chapter 25 . 3/18/2010
I stumbled across your story a few days ago, and now that I'm finished...I just wanted to tell you how much this story entertained me and made me feel angry, happy and giddy for the last three days!

The ending left me literally breathless - it really took me a few minutes to get my heart back to normal, letting it sink in. I'm glad they got to talk in the end - and the tongue ring Stine gave her just made my eyes watery. I can't believe they didn't get together - but what do I know...maybe they did, in some imaginary world where they just happened to bump into each other. But that's just me hoping...

My favorite characters would probably be Riz, Stine, Lash, Cassie, and Louis. Yes, even if Louis did only appear in a chapter or two...I liked his personality a lot! You made Stine sound really friggin' hot - now I've got an eeny meany crush on him -, and you made Oz all dreamy but boring, just like Riz felt they were throughout the story. Not to forget Ben - he really sounded like a maniac. I laughed my ass off in those chapters, and I liked how Lash and Rachelle acted the heroes!

The spelling errors and grammar mistakes have gotten much less towards the end. The plot might be shallow, but it seemed pretty much believable to me. I really noticed your improvement through each chapter!

I'm not really expecting a sequel, since I happen to know how it feels like writing a story that you just can't seem to write anymore - no matter how hard you try. Maybe your love towards your story would just come back someday, like mine did a month ago? But if you do decide to make a He Punks Me Not rewrite...I'll be looking forward to it!

I'd love to read about Riz and Stine again in the future. Thank you very much for a heart-stopping, hilarious, and amazing read! :D

-Rii. :B
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