|Reviews for He Punks Me Not|
| ck chapter 2 . 10/10/2003
I liked it. I can't wait until we get to the more interesting parts, but this was still interesting. Update as soon as you can.
| AlienVision chapter 2 . 10/10/2003
this chapter was full of nothing... she wasn't so obsessed this time... they actually talked... if u could make sense of my rambling genius... good work! update soon!
| Punk Rock Trash chapter 2 . 10/10/2003
Wow! Really, that's all I can say and that I hope something happens soon! I once fell for a guy similar to Oz, named Clark. Exact same. Dyed black hair, gorgous blue eyes, punk-skater-stoner. He also happens to be my best friend's ex. Hahaha. I love how Riz/Charisee (preppy rich girl name good thing you picked that one out) is so nervous around Oz. i would really like to hear somethin about them in Art Class together, you know. Get some chemistry goin, yo! It's AWESOME so far! Can't WAIT for more!
| Heaven Take Me Home chapter 2 . 10/10/2003
It wasn't a pointless chapter. How does Andrew tie into all of this?
| madapple chapter 1 . 10/10/2003
i think this is great. but i'm not into the whole 'body piercing' thing. but oh well. i love the plot! and i like Oz too. :P
| down.escence.park chapter 1 . 10/9/2003
OZ? Ahh how toot( cute in sid's language.) lol, this is adorable. I WANT A TONGUE PEIRCING TOO! Maybe Zara should pretned to be my momma, huh? No it wont work, cuz i look like zara's momma. okah hun god job. CONTINUE. the character thing is a LITTLE confusing, is her name Chassie or Riz? okay well seeyah Iman Essex(Ryans last name..;))
| False Advertisement chapter 1 . 10/9/2003
Critisism... Well... uh...lets see. I think that you should make Charisse/Riz a little less shallow. Its wonderful your writing in first person! Whe. I have two surprises for you. LOL. Okay. Plz go online cuz i never talk to you just your brother and hes getting annoyed that i always say hi cuz i think its you :(
I noticed [Hes got tattoos AND peircings] lol. Ciao!
| zsiddiq chapter 1 . 10/9/2003
OOh, another 1 of your amazing new stories for me to read. I love it so far! The part about getting the tongue ring by her friend pretending to be her mom sounding SO familiar, lol. Its not fair that she has a cool cuz who gets it done for her...wait...BABAR!
LoL, love it. Update soon.
| ck chapter 1 . 10/9/2003
I like this story. Update soon. I want to know what happens with the piercing. Please update soon. Thanks.
| LessConfusionEnsues chapter 1 . 10/9/2003
too lazy to sign in...anyways, more more more! pleasse! i just wrote a poem that kind of reminds me of this...the whole bad boy thing. my first love was one of those bad boys...did weed, got drunk...still does. pooey. anyways, continue this, please!
| Heaven Take Me Home chapter 1 . 10/9/2003
This is certainly a story worth finishing! Does she get that piercing? Update soon!
| AlienVision chapter 1 . 10/9/2003
yeah... cool...a new story... ok, some constructive critisism...
can u make her...um... less "revolving-her-life-around-some-rebel-guy-she -never-talked-too?"? please... and, oh yeah, get her a life. mayB make her get over the guy... and he notices her latr or something... i really like ur style of writing...but this story, just doesn't sound right. she seems like that cheerleader shallow type, wanting to date a rebel... pulease... give this story an actual plot...
i'm sorry if this review was a bit harsh... i really like ur writing, but mayB u could change the plot or something? or give the main character a life? sorry...there i go again... i'll stop the constructive critisism now.. i m really sorry... update soon though!
| Pissed-AN-Confused chapter 1 . 10/9/2003
what happens with the guy?
does she get her piercings?
i need to know you better damn well finish this story
or i will hurt you!
great job cant wait to read more so hurry!