|Reviews for Insomniac Poetry Theatre: Untitled Unfinished?|
| maybeitsmaybeline chapter 1 . 7/29/2005
that is unfinished
i say a couple lines, or more
| S.J.Jones chapter 1 . 5/7/2005
"For everytime I'm down you take me. Rough and careless doomed to break me." I loved those lines, the whole poem was wonderful.
| Dying Without Gackt chapter 1 . 12/25/2004
"And maybe if I'm blind...to me." I like that line. Seriously your ideas are really different. Love them.
| Madame Irma chapter 1 . 10/9/2003
"I really didn't mean
to bring a tear into
sometimes when you're
being you I half forget
that you can cry.
I think you're pretty,
in the dark-
because that's when
I cannot see.
And maybe if I'm blind
I won't know what it does
to me. . . "
Those are my favorite stanzas. I think it's finished as is. I really like your work.