Reviews for Insomniac Poetry Theatre: Untitled Unfinished?
maybeitsmaybeline chapter 1 . 7/29/2005
that is unfinished

i say a couple lines, or more
S.J.Jones chapter 1 . 5/7/2005
"For everytime I'm down you take me. Rough and careless doomed to break me." I loved those lines, the whole poem was wonderful.
Dying Without Gackt chapter 1 . 12/25/2004
"And maybe if I'm blind...to me." I like that line. Seriously your ideas are really different. Love them.
Madame Irma chapter 1 . 10/9/2003
"I really didn't mean

to bring a tear into

your eye-

sometimes when you're

being you I half forget

that you can cry.

I think you're pretty,

in the dark-

because that's when

I cannot see.

And maybe if I'm blind

I won't know what it does

to me. . . "

Those are my favorite stanzas. I think it's finished as is. I really like your work.