Reviews for Pigments
insanemonkeyboy chapter 1 . 10/28/2003
heh - it was different - rythmic, somewhat funny I thought anyway - anyway - it was good

Thanks for the reviews btw
swirlygirl chapter 1 . 10/19/2003
that was different i enjoyed it a lot!
pippin tomson chapter 1 . 10/14/2003
i like your poem, it's happy!
JJR Meerraf chapter 1 . 10/11/2003
It is weird, but me like. Your rhyming was some times a little too good, like words that sound exactly alike make it sound a little... weird, but over all it was still a good poem.

Writers Block hasn't struck too badly, don't be discouraged.
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 10/9/2003
the last stanza is jsut rnadomly put in there.. it needs a segway... otherwise its pretty good! sorry about the writers block
Nerf chapter 1 . 10/9/2003
I agree it aint ur best, but it reli isn't bad. U hav sum reli great rymes.

Well done!


I'm sur u wil work through the writers block.
AVIGON chapter 1 . 10/9/2003
I for one LOVE poetry that's all about rhythm, and I think I discovered enough rhythm in this one to make me like it, although I wouldn't have minded it if you got the poem to pick up the pace a bit more.
hellomister chapter 1 . 10/9/2003
Well, very creative.

But I am completely lost in translation.

What is this about, again?

I really like the idea of "Black clouds leaning".
Wren Craven chapter 1 . 10/9/2003
That was so cool! please R&R my work! I need the reviews!