Reviews for Mixed Emotions
ccazale chapter 1 . 9/24/2005
hostly, I dont like this one quit as much as the others iv read, its fort, and not wordy enough, but mysterious like your other ones, which i like, a lot
Soviet chapter 1 . 9/16/2004
Hmm, I like this poem, it's very intresting, I like the simplicity of the line, it really gives a good feel to the poems
suckerplucker chapter 1 . 6/13/2004
Even though the format to which you've limited yourself is very restrictive, I think that you do a good job of expressing (yet again) a great sense of accidental emotional hypocrisy and regret. Let your lines be longer! don't limit yourself so!

ps. just to continue my theme, I think that this too would fit really well in the format of scenework.
Swanny chapter 1 . 4/2/2004
I like this and as u can c ive also got a poem called mixed emotions. Like proudtobeanonymous sed its great how u can say so much out of of so little and i luv it.
Luv swanny
somethingpoeticandmeaningful chapter 1 . 10/10/2003
Wow, it's really good! It's awesome how words can express so much in so little. If that made any freakin' sense.

I love ya!


Jane Austen the 2nd chapter 1 . 10/9/2003
The lines are short. They flow well though. Really beautiful wording here.

It's simply divine!

pretty pink:)
AnjaBriar chapter 1 . 10/9/2003
That was great. I loved it!