|Reviews for 500 Words|
| Austin H chapter 1 . 10/10/2003
Wow! Terrific use of descriptors. The story seems metaphorical. I see it as representing anyone's struggle in life: physical or mental. Ultimately, we really have no choice but to go on in the face of adversity. Great job!
| Forsakn chapter 1 . 10/9/2003
Ehh, quite all right, I suppose.