Reviews for Untitled
ccazale chapter 1 . 9/24/2005
during math clas?

it makes you cry?

i really dont get, math is fun...if you understans, but my family has a thing for math, and we're all pretty good at it, so we like it,

but i know many people who hate it as well, so i kind of get it, kind of
Anastata chapter 1 . 7/28/2005
"one touching poem, can change someones heart." Natasha
Soviet chapter 1 . 9/16/2004
The last line is awesome. The rest of the poem is okay...
I liked the fast/short rhythm of the previous poem more, this poem is too streched and forced at parts, but still rather well done.
suckerplucker chapter 1 . 6/15/2004
This seems like alot to happen in one day, but hey, it's definitely possible.
I think that what's holding this poem back the most is the fact that you are so committed to rhyming. If you let yourself go and really rocked out some free verse on this, I think you'd have a great piece on your hands.
zac
eggy chapter 1 . 10/10/2003
I love you hun!
Allyboo chapter 1 . 10/9/2003
WOW!I Love the end paragraph, i love it all!