Reviews for time's mermaid
Ashlee Pond chapter 1 . 4/11/2011
This feels very bittersweet, and the description and imagery are beautiful.

You do a lovely job of evoking emotion throughout the poem, it was fantastic to read.
Protege chapter 1 . 11/14/2003
OOk! I liked this one very much. It reminded me of pounding, and the words were real, and very cool. Mathematical yet still poetic. Good Job!
Rose Mermaid chapter 1 . 10/30/2003
I like this. It seems like it would make a good song.